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diff --git a/ont-Huawei-HG8010H.md b/ont-Huawei-HG8010H.md
index 0e2d373..a70c40e 100644
--- a/ont-Huawei-HG8010H.md
+++ b/ont-Huawei-HG8010H.md
@@ -23,9 +23,10 @@ parent: ONT
 | SSH         |                                                 |
 | Form Factor | ONT                                             |
 
-{% include image.html file="HG8010H.jpg"  alt="HG8010H" caption="HG8010H: port pon horizontal (left, middle), pon vertical (right)" %}
-{% include image.html file="HG8010Hvorr.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv3/4/5" caption="HG8010Hv3/4/5 back" %}
-{% include image.html file="HG8010Hv6.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv6" caption="HG8010Hv6 back" %}
+
+{% include image.html file="HG8010H.jpg"  alt="HG8010H" caption="HG8010H: Horizontal PON port (left, middle); vertical PON port (right)" %}
+{% include image.html file="HG8010Hvorr.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv3/4/5" caption="Back of the HG8010Hv3/4/5" %}
+{% include image.html file="HG8010Hv6.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv6" caption="Back of the HG8010Hv6" %}
 {% include image.html file="HG8010H_Teardown_1.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv1/2 Teardown" caption="HG8010Hv1/2: Teardown" %}
 {% include image.html file="HG8010H_Teardown_2.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv1/2 Teardown" caption="HG8010Hv1/2: Teardown" %}
 {% include image.html file="HG8010H_Teardown_1_v6.jpg"  alt="HG8010Hv6 Teardown" caption="HG8010Hv6: Teardown" %}
@@ -33,23 +34,23 @@ parent: ONT
 
 ## Enabling telnet
 
-We need access to a specific shell and in order to get it we have to enable telnet. On the unit, the telnet server accepted connections but didn’t read any input, nor did it send anything.
+We need access to a specific shell and in order to get it we have to enable telnet. On the unit, the telnet server accepts connections but doesn't read any input, nor does it send anything.
 
-To enable telnet we’ll use one of the web interface’s feature: the configuration backup and restore page. The configuration can be downloaded as XML, an XML file that contains a lot more options than the web interface and a couple of them can be modified to enable telnet access: under the `X_HW_CLITelnetAccess` node, set the `Access` attribute to `1` and in `AclServices`, `TELNETLanEnable` should also be set to `1`. I’ve had to set both but your mileage may vary. 
+To enable telnet we’ll use one of the web interface’s feature: the configuration backup and restore page. The configuration can be downloaded as XML, an XML file that contains a lot more options than the web interface and a couple of them can be modified to enable telnet access: under the `X_HW_CLITelnetAccess` node, set the `Access` attribute to `1` and in `AclServices`, `TELNETLanEnable` should also be set to `1`. I had to set both but your mileage may vary. 
 
-It is possible that in more recent versions it does not go/is not fixed.
+It is possible that in more recent versions this won't work/has been fixed.
 
-Now that this is done, the modified configuration file can be uploaded on the web interface, the ONT will restart and telnet will be accessible on port 23.
+Now that this is done, the modified configuration file can be uploaded via the web interface, the ONT will restart and telnet should be accessible on port 23.
 
-## Hardware revision
-- v1: port pon horizontal
-- v2: port pon horizontal
-- v3: port pon vertical
-- v4: port pon vertical
-- v5: port pon vertical
-- v6: port pon vertical
+## Hardware revisions
+- v1: Horizontal PON port 
+- v2: Horizontal PON port 
+- v3: Vertical PON port
+- v4: Vertical PON port
+- v5: Vertical PON port
+- v6: Vertical PON port
 
-## Software version
+## List of software versions
 
 - HWTCA31610003
 - V3R016C10S003 (V300R016C10SPC003B010)
@@ -57,12 +58,13 @@ Now that this is done, the modified configuration file can be uploaded on the we
 - V5R020C10S024 (V500R020C10SPC024B001)
 - V5R020C10S020 (V500R020C10SPC020B014)
 
-## List of software version
-## List of partition
-## List of firmware and files
+## List of partitions
+## List of firmwares and files
+# Known Bugs
 # Miscellaneous Links
 
 - [Exploring the Huawei HG8010H GPON ONT](https://www.linux.it/~md/text/gpon-sha2017.pdf)
 - [Unlock HG8010Hv3 softmode](https://lafibre.info/orange-installation/unlock-hg8010gv3-softmode/)
-- [Notes on a Huwei HG810H (N.B. SSL error)](https://umbriel.fr/blog/Notes_on_a_Huawei_HG8010H.html)
+- [Notes on a Huawei HG810H (N.B. SSL error)](https://umbriel.fr/blog/Notes_on_a_Huawei_HG8010H.html)
+