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diff --git a/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md b/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md
index 4512a1d..97ba48b 100644
--- a/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md
+++ b/ont-technicolor-afm0002.md
@@ -25,14 +25,14 @@ parent: ONT
 {% include image.html file="afm0002tim.jpg" alt="AFM0002TIM" caption="AFM0002TIM" %}
 
 
-# Hardware revision
+# Hardware Revisions
 
 - AFM0002TIM (IP address: 192.168.2.1)
 - AFM0002FWB (IP address: 169.0.0.1)
 - AFM0002WND
 
-{% include warning.html content="On this page we discuss AFM0002TIM" %}
-{% include info.html content="The AFM0002FWB can be transformed into AFM0002TIM. The AFM0002FWB has an older sw version." %}
+{% include warning.html content="The version used to obtain the info shown on this page is the AFM0002TIM" %}
+{% include info.html content="The AFM0002FWB can be transformed into AFM0002TIM. The AFM0002FWB has an older software version." %}
 
 
 # List of software versions
@@ -63,9 +63,9 @@ parent: ONT
 
 This stick supports dual boot. 
 
-`k0` and `r0` contains respectively the kernel and firmware of the first image, `k1` and `r1` of the second one
+`k0` and `r0` respectively contain the kernel and firmware of the first image, `k1` and `r1` the kernel and the firmware of the second one
 
-# List of firmware and files
+# List of firmwares and files
 ## Useful files
 - `/var/config/lastgood.xml` - Contains the user portion of the configuration
 - `/var/config/lastgood-hs.xml` - Contains the "hardware" configuration (i.e. that _should_ not be changed)
@@ -79,18 +79,18 @@ This stick supports dual boot.
 - `omci_app` - The OMCI daemon
 - `diag` - Used to run low-level diagnostics commands on the stick
 
-# Useful commands
+# Useful Commands
 
-## Get/Set the ONT S/N
+## Getting/Setting the ONT's S/N
 ```sh
 # /etc/scripts/bin flash get GPON_SN
 GPON_SN=TMBB00000000
 # /etc/scripts/bin flash set GPON_SN TMBB0A1B2C3D
 ```
 
-## Get/Set the ONT PLOAM password
+## Getting/Setting the ONT's PLOAM password
 
-{% include info.html content="The PLOAM password is in ASCII format" %}
+{% include info.html content="The PLOAM password is stored in ASCII format" %}
 
 ```sh
 # /etc/scripts/bin flash get GPON_PLOAM_PASSWD
@@ -98,12 +98,12 @@ GPON_PLOAM_PASSWD=AAAAAAAAAA
 # /etc/scripts/bin flash set GPON_PLOAM_PASSWD AAAAAAAAAA
 ```
 
-## Enable the Web UI
+## Enabling the Web UI
 ```sh
 # /bin/iptables -D INPUT -p tcp --dport 80 -j DROP
 ```
 
-## Check the currently active image
+## Checking the currently active image
 ```sh
 # nv getenv sw_active
 sw_activ=1
@@ -113,23 +113,23 @@ sw_version0=V1_7_8_210412
 sw_version1=V1_7_8_210412
 ```
 
-## Boot to a different image
+## Booting to a different image
 ```sh
 # nv setenv sw_commit 0|1
 # reboot
 ```
 
-## Query a particular OMCI ME
+## Querying a particular OMCI ME
 ```sh
 # omcicli mib get MIB_IDX
 ```
 
-# Low level modding
+# Low Level Modding
 
-{% include warning.html content="This section is based on version `V1_7_8_210412` of the stick" %}
+{% include warning.html content="This section is based on `V1_7_8_210412` firmware version of the stick" %}
 
 
-## Trasnfer files from/to the stick
+## Trasnfering files from/to the stick
 Works with binary files too, just run md5sum on source and destination to make sure you are not corrupting anything...
 From the stick to the PC:
 ```sh
@@ -140,16 +140,16 @@ From the PC to the stick
 # cat lastgood.xml | ssh admin@192.168.2.1  "cat > /var/config/lastgood.xml"
 ```
 
-{% include warning.html content="on windows replace type with cat and run the commands from cmd (not powershell)" %}
+{% include warning.html content="If a Windows system is used replace type with cat and run the commands from cmd (not Powershell)" %}
 
-## Extract and repack the rootfs
+## Extracting and repacking the rootfs
 ```sh
 # unsquashfs mtd5.bin
 # mksquashfs squashfs-root rootfs -b 131072 -comp lzma -no-recovery
 ```
-## Flash a new rootfs
+## Flashing a new rootfs
 
-{% include info.html content="you can only flash the inactive image" %}
+{% include info.html content="Only the inactive image can be flashed" %}
 
 So mtd4/5 if you are on image1, mtd6/7 if you are on image0.
 
@@ -160,8 +160,8 @@ The follwing examples flashes a new rootfs to image1 and boots to it
 # nv setenv sw_commit=1
 # reboot
 ```
-## Add support to configurable SW and HW versions, VENDOR ID and much more
-We can patch `/etc/scripts/flash` in order to add support for some variables implemented in `omci_app` but removed from `xmlconfig`. The patch is below (change the values to suit your needs)
+## Adding support to configurable SW and HW versions, VENDOR ID and much more
+`/etc/scripts/flash` can be flashed in order to add support for some variables implemented in `omci_app` but removed from `xmlconfig`. The patch is below (change the values to suit your needs)
 ```patch
 --- squashfs-root/etc/scripts/flash     2021-09-28 10:38:52.000000000 +0200
 +++ squashfs-root.new/etc/scripts/flash 2022-08-04 00:00:29.769605000 +0200
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ We can patch `/etc/scripts/flash` in order to add support for some variables imp
                 if [ "$?" = "0" ]; then
                         exit 0
 ```                        
-## Increase the length of the software version from 13 to 14 characters
+## Increasing the length of the software version from 13 to 14 characters
 `omci_app` has an hard-coded limit of 13 characters for the software version, which is too low. We can binary patch it to increase it to 14 (or more, if you dare/need)
 ```
 JVhEWjAwNCUAAAAIAAgACAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABvbWNpX2FwcG9tY2lfYXBwH4sIAAAAAAAA
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ For reference, the patch changes the follwing section of the omci_app:
 
 The original file md5sum is: `4aea2f72bacc11256b7e2c1583d2ad4f`
 The patched file md5sum is: `da20327c4c002e4c27f82f6ee63dbc1a`
-## Enable PLOAM logging
+## Enabling PLOAM logging
 ```sh
 /etc/scripts/bin flash set OMCI_DBGLVL 1
 /etc/scripts/bin flash set OMCI_DBGLOGFILE 1
@@ -227,10 +227,12 @@ reboot
 ```
 1. The binary log will be placed inside: `/tmp/omcilog`
 2. You can convert it into .pcap using https://github.com/ADeltaX/omcilog2pcap
-3. You can then open it into wireshark by installing the OMCI plugin from https://wiki.wireshark.org/Contrib.md
+3. You can then open it with Wireshark by installing the OMCI plugin from https://wiki.wireshark.org/Contrib.md
    
 If you want to log everything since the stick boots, you can create a custom rootfs. Place the last command inside `etc/runomci.sh` as the last line of the file
 
+# Known Bugs
+
 # Miscellaneous Links
 
 - [omcilog2pcap](https://github.com/ADeltaX/omcilog2pcap)
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